Polish the sentences in this paragraph:

The Circus

There was a circus tent at the edge of town.    Everyone was talking about the strange and wonderful animals there!   The elephants were huge!  The giraffes were tall.  The lions were fierce!  There was one animal that looked like a mixture between a horse and a camel.  It was creamy colored.   Unusual sights and sounds were pulling people to the circus.
 
One possible way to polish the paragraph.

 

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